The "Perfect" World



The "perfect" world would be the worst world to live in. There is no such thing as a Utopia, because a Utopia is also a Dystopia. This is because you would need everyone to stay the same so they don't accidentally or purposely cause trouble, and how are you going to fend off enemies from your "perfect" world? Do you see it yet? The world can't be perfect, because if it is it would also be a Dystopia, you need to get food, a military, a water supply, entertainment, and much more. As you can see so far, there is no such thing as a "perfect" world, if there was such a thing as a "perfect" world, then we are far, far away from it. If I had a perfect world, it would only be disorder, death, and other vile things to be on this Earth.
                                                                                     
                                                                                                                                      -Jack Guy Musser

Dear Apollo, the most wonderful god of all,

You are by far the most handsome and stunning god ever! Your eyes are as bright as the rising sun. Your poetry and rhymes flow smoother than a rainbow in the sky (that are only made possible because of your sun chariot of course).  All of your magnificent songs cannot be matched in skill or creativity. The verses almost come alive as you life to a song that could not be mastered by anyone but you - the most skilled musician  of all. Also, your archery is as good as your looks - Perfect! You could hit a bulls eye on mount Olympus from the Underworld! I know this is true love if true love has ever happened before.

With my undying affection,
Apollo

By; Braxton Dunbar

A Perfect World

      Let's drift off in a daydream that will take you to a perfect world where everyone loved each other. If you have ever read the book, "The Christmas Candle," the world would be like an enlarged version of that story. There would be a lot more people because if everybody loved each other as much as they loved themselves there would be no war, gangs, suicide, bullying, homelessness, starvation, a need for rules, government, money, and everybody would live together in harmony. There would be no war because there would be nobody to fight against. There would be no government and nothing to fight over. There would be no gangs because you wouldn't harm those you love. There wouldn't be any bullying, so everybody would be helping each other feel good about themselves. Hence, there would be no suicide. The homeless and the starving would receive homes and have full stomaches because everyone would pitch in to help each other in a crisis. Everyone would discover together, explore together, and live together as one. No one would be unemployed because everybody would want to help pitch in. There would be no money because there would be no need of a reward for working. The reward would be helping someone else, which means there would be no telemarketers. Hallelujah! Sign me up to live in that world.

-Phoenix O.

Dear Arwen,

            You are my one true love. I am so lucky and grateful to have you in my life. It was an amazing sacfrifice you made to stay for me. I love how your eyes sparkle, and how your smile is the happiest sight on Middle Earth. Your skin is like a glowing moon, and your hair is like an ebony night. You are so kind, caring, protective, fair, and loving. Your are so beautiful on the inside and outside, and I love you so much.

                Love,
                        Aragorn

               A Perfect World

     Close your eyes, and imagine a perfect world world where every single person loves everybody else as much as themselves. Sometimes it could be hard to imagine this, so let me give you some of my thoughts. First of all, if you love someone, you have to know them very well right? So this means that everybody in a certain area would know everybody personally, and if they meet someone new, then people would soon learn to love them. If everybody knew all the people surrounding them, then there would be no bullying, exclusion, and little judging. People would be able to see the good and the talents that other people have, along with helping their neighbors spread the good around. All of this can change our families and communities because we would be much more efficient. For example, with learning and teaching, because we would all know each other very well, then we could convey a message out to everybody really easily since different people learn differently. Also, everybody would be able to work together to accomplish a certain task. Because everybody would love each other, there would be more communication, and understanding. Unlike the world today, most people would seek to understand, instead of seeking to be understood. Overall, a world filled with love would be utterly amazing. 

                                                                                     By: Bryce C.

Dear Hazel Grace, 

     Well Hazel Grace, I don't know where to start.  Your beautiful and I like looking at beautiful girls so...  Look I don't have much time left but if I could tell you anything it would be that you are perfect.  There is nobody else I would rather spend my last days with than you.  Being with you makes me feel complete and at my highest.  I can't tell your enough how much I love you.  Not one person in this whole world has ever caught my attention like you have.  I knew from the start you were the one, maybe you didn't but I never had any doubts.  I love everything about you, from your personality to your Stage 4 Thyroid cancer.  Nothing could ever make an individual so perfect.  I love your till my very last breath, and even longer.

Love, Augustus Waters

by: ellie bethers

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