Dear Apollo, the most wonderful god of all,
You are by far the most handsome and stunning god ever! Your eyes are as bright as the rising sun. Your poetry and rhymes flow smoother than a rainbow in the sky (that are only made possible because of your sun chariot of course). All of your magnificent songs cannot be matched in skill or creativity. The verses almost come alive as you life to a song that could not be mastered by anyone but you - the most skilled musician of all. Also, your archery is as good as your looks - Perfect! You could hit a bulls eye on mount Olympus from the Underworld! I know this is true love if true love has ever happened before.With my undying affection,
Apollo
By; Braxton Dunbar
This is actually hilarious! It's so funny, and good writing, but maybe make your sentences a little longer.
ReplyDeleteGreat work Braxton. It had a sense of humor (as it he was writing to himself) and the spelling looked great. The only thing I saw about it is (prepare for another dumb criticism from Jack) that there were two spaces between musician and of.
ReplyDeleteGreat job! Great writing. You could maybe make it a little longer though.
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