A Perfect World
Close your eyes, and imagine a perfect world world where every single person loves everybody else as much as themselves. Sometimes it could be hard to imagine this, so let me give you some of my thoughts. First of all, if you love someone, you have to know them very well right? So this means that everybody in a certain area would know everybody personally, and if they meet someone new, then people would soon learn to love them. If everybody knew all the people surrounding them, then there would be no bullying, exclusion, and little judging. People would be able to see the good and the talents that other people have, along with helping their neighbors spread the good around. All of this can change our families and communities because we would be much more efficient. For example, with learning and teaching, because we would all know each other very well, then we could convey a message out to everybody really easily since different people learn differently. Also, everybody would be able to work together to accomplish a certain task. Because everybody would love each other, there would be more communication, and understanding. Unlike the world today, most people would seek to understand, instead of seeking to be understood. Overall, a world filled with love would be utterly amazing.
By: Bryce C.
Good, Bryce, good. Your writing and elaboration were amazing. The only thing I would say that needed to be different is (prepare for another dumb criticism by Jack) there was a so at the beginning of sentence four.
ReplyDeleteGreat job Bryce. I couldn't find any mistakes. Keep up the great writing.
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