St Patricks Day!! For almost all of us this is the day that we can pinch people for simply not wearing green. But, do you know where this holiday really comes from? According to ''https://www.history.com/topics/st-patricks-day/history-of-st-patricks-day'' Saint Patricks Day is actually a day for a man named Saint patrick. He was actually a slave to the irish who escaped but than later came back and was credited for bringing christianity to the irish people. In the text," ''https://www.history.com/topics/st-patricks-day/history-of-st-patricks-day'' we started celebrating it when irish people immigrated to america we didn't like them very much. But when we realized the political power they gave us we started having parades to celebrate them. That is the history of St Patricks Day.
Good job! I liked that you cited the source of where you got your information. I think that is very important. Next time try to add more detail and make sure to tell us who wrote this amazing essay!
ReplyDeleteGreat job! you could make it a little longer. I'd like to learn more about why we celebrate St. Patrick in particular. Also make sure you write your name or you won't get credit! Great job though!
ReplyDeleteThat was very good! I agree with Kennedie and Kamree so add those few things and it would be even better!
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