St. Patrick's Day
By: Anna Steel
St. Patrick's day is such a fun holiday, full of many fun things to do! St. Patrick's day was first stared by the Irish. It is a cultural and religious celebration celebrated on March 17. According to www.history.com: ¨ In observance of the death of Saint Patrick, the patron saint of Ireland." This is saying why we celebrated this holiday, because of the death of Saint Patrick. Now days Saint Patrick's day involves parades, special foods, music, dancing, and a whole lot of green. They started celebrating Saints Patrick's day in 1737 and still continue it today. Some facts about Saint Patrick is he was actually British and not Irish, he also when he was a boy was captured and taken to Ireland where he spent around six years in slavery herding sheep and then the legend says that he escaped on a pirate ship. Then in his 30's he decided to go back and then soon became the patron of Ireland. Hes a pretty cool man. To conclude, I hope you know a little more about St. Patrick's day!
Yours was great! the only suggestion that I have, is when you said "Hes a pretty cool man." Maybe you should have typed "He's" instead of "Hes". Other than that, your post was awesome.
ReplyDeleteI loved this! The only thing I saw was the same as Bryce's. Keep it up!!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the advice I really appreciate it!!!
ReplyDeleteThis was really good! The only thing I saw was what Bryce and Camille already said. Other than that I loved it!
ReplyDeleteThis was really really good! I like all the detail you used! I noticed the same thing as Courtney Bryce and Camille! I also noticed that one sentence said "Now days Saint Patrick's day" and that didn't make complete sense to me, maybe I'm reading it wrong haha! But maybe check that sentence :))
ReplyDeleteI loved all the detail you used Anna! Nice job! I did notice that you said "hes" instead of "he's". Other than that it was amazing! Keep up the good work!:)
ReplyDeleteI liked how much detail you used and I didn't notice anything different from the rest. Other than that simple mistake it was super good! Keep it up! :D
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