Hi I'm Halle! Some of the most common advice was to not procrastinate! I procrastinated a lot last year. it was terrible. I was always putting off all of my work till either the day it was due or the day before it was due. I was always stressed about it so I'm not going to go through that again. Another piece of advice was to read. I love to read so that hopefully will help this year. The last piece of advice I read was to pay attention. All of those combined will make me a better student and this year a lot better than last.
I'm for sure not the best writer in the class. I don't always love to write. I like to write when its a topic that I like or feel strongly about. But if it's something I don't like I put it off a lot then I don't do it as good as I should. It's bad I know. So this year I'm going to do better. I guess I started writing in preschool. That's all I have for this blog.
I like all the enthusiasm in your writing and it was really good. The writing was pretty much perfect. Just remember to read through it and fix the mistakes because there is some sentences you forgot to capitalize the first word.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the advice! I didn't even see that when I was looking for mistakes.
DeleteOwen, you are giving such great feedback: thanks!
DeleteGood job on this! You put this together really well! One thing I have to say is use your punctuation. Like commas and stuff. Other than that this essay is super good! Love ya ;)
ReplyDeleteGood job Halle! You did amassing!! Just make sure you read through. Because there is some mistakes in there. But over all you did great!
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ReplyDeleteAh Halle, don't be saying you're not the best writer in class-we are all improving together! I'm super jazzed to see you flourish this year and gain confidence:) Yes, double-check grammar--quick fixes though. Great summary of advice from last year. I'm so happy to have you in class! Thanks!!
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