Family Christmas Traditions
Anna B.
My favorite family Christmas tradition is going up to Salt Lake to stay at my grandparent's hotel
and drinking peach sparkling soda, eggnog, and whatever good smelling concoctions we can find
at stores. We always stay up until midnight and then go into a frenzy opening presents. The moms
disagree with staying up that late, but the dad's side always wins.
and drinking peach sparkling soda, eggnog, and whatever good smelling concoctions we can find
at stores. We always stay up until midnight and then go into a frenzy opening presents. The moms
disagree with staying up that late, but the dad's side always wins.
When we finally finish with presents, (usually near 4 am,) we run to the exercise room to try to tone
down energy, then finally go to bed at 5ish.We always sleep in really late, then overload on donuts
, shakes, and smoothies. (This always comes with the protesting of my mom, my aunts, and my
grandma, but this is the one time of the year when my mom's rule doesn’t go.
down energy, then finally go to bed at 5ish.We always sleep in really late, then overload on donuts
, shakes, and smoothies. (This always comes with the protesting of my mom, my aunts, and my
grandma, but this is the one time of the year when my mom's rule doesn’t go.
Wow! I really enjoyed your detail! That was amazing! I have no corrections what so ever.
ReplyDeleteThis is great writing Anna! There is just one correction I saw and that was on your second paragraph, second sentence you put a space between a word and a comma. Other than that I love it!
ReplyDeleteGreat job Anna. You wrote great, but try to make your writing flow better and be less choppy.
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