I like only enjoy writing certain things, like fantasy, but I don't really like writing informative or argumentative. I like writing things that include magic and things that take you away from the real world. It helps me use my imagination. I hope that by the end of the year I will be able to enjoy writing other things than fantasy.
Tuesday, August 29, 2017
Hi guys! I'm Jocelyn Olson. I just finished reading the advice from last years honors language arts students. The three main things that I saw were, 1. DON'T PROCRASTINATE. This is a big habit of mine. I always find myself waiting until the last minute to do things. Just like how I am writing on the blog two days before it is due! 2. Pay attention. This is big too, because if you don't pay attention, you won't know what to do. 3. Read. Obviously we should read, because we are in honors language arts and we are required to read to keep our grade up. I think that as I do these things this year they will help me be stress free, and enjoy reading and writing.
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Yours was really great and I loved it! Towards the middle of the first paragraph, in the place where it says "This is big too," you do not need the comma there because there is because after, also with taking out the comma, it could be good if you replaced the period before it with a comma.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your paragraphs! I thought you wrote everything out very well! I also agree with Bryce about the comma but other than that it was great!!
ReplyDeleteYours was really good, in fact so good that I couldn't find anything wrong with until I read the other comments. You had really good transitions that made it all really smooth, but I agree with the other posts I don't think you need a comma right there.
ReplyDeleteGreat Job Jocelyn, I thought you did really well. I also agree with Bryce on the comma thing but other than that you did a great job!
ReplyDeleteGood job Jocelyn!! It's a great post from a great person. I also agree with Bryce's comma thing, but I didn't even notice till I read his comment.
ReplyDeleteGood job! Your writing is so smooth and is easy to read. I also agree with Bryce on the comma in the first paragraph. I always have the habit of waiting till the last day and can relate with you.
ReplyDeleteCan I just say I love that there is an entire thread about a comma? Great writing Jocelyn. I really like hearing what you write and your commitment not to procrastinate! Lol! Keep up the good work:) Yes, watch for appropriate use of commas.
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