Hi! This is Anna B. I just finished reading some really great posts from last years honors class. The first piece of advice is DO NOT PROCRASTINATE!! I am really bad about this and I am trying to do better this year. The second one is PAY ATTENTION!! I tend to zone out during class, but I don´t think that will be a problem because Mrs. Robins is super exciting and interesting. And thirdly, just relax! Last year, I procrastinated a lot and I got really stressed out.
I love reading, and don´t usually pay attention to anything else while I´m reading. I´m hoping to improve my writing stamina (writing for a longer amount of time without stopping) and learn more vocabulary words. I love writing, especially detailed writing, using the senses to help a person imagine a scene for about 2 minutes.
Your writing is good. I like that you put in what you did with the pieces of advice last year and what you will do.
ReplyDeleteNice Anna! Good writing, but maybe try to lengthen your sentences a little bit.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you used the capitalization, as you can´t use the curved thing or whatever. It made me like it because it was funnier then some of the other comments. The only thing I don´t like about it was the use of double exclamation marks. Well anyways, see ya!
ReplyDeleteHey, Jack--this is for you!!!! Ha, ha
ReplyDeleteGreat writing Anna! I liked that it was right to the point:) Good job picking out key words. I love that your goals are vocab and stamina--those are mine too as a teacher, so you'll be awesome this year in class. So happy to have you. As you revise, elaborate more:) Well done!