Friday, September 22, 2017

Dear Mrs. Gubler,
      I heard you were going to invite a celebrity to our school. I think that Michael Jordan would be a wonderful visitor for our school. He was an amazing basketball player and it would be a very cool experience. He could tell us about hard work and what it takes to reach your dreams. I believe he would inspire very many kids in our school to try harder. There are so many good reasons why we should invite Micheal Jordan to our school. Thank you.

-Jocelyn Olson
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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 22, 2017 at 8:08 AM

    That was really good! I really liked how you said thank you at the end.

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 24, 2017 at 6:50 PM

    That was really good writing. One thing you could fix was give an extra reason why Michael Jordan should come to our school. However, you did a excellent job.

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  3. Mrs.RobinsSeptember 29, 2017 at 2:13 PM

    Having Michael Jordan come would be great! Good, clean writing across the board. Yes, add more--more specific reasons with details. Thanks!!

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