Dear Mrs. Gubler
I heard you were looking for a celebrity to come to our school, I think that Donald Trump would be a very exiting visitor. He is the President of the United States, a very important character and would bring good advice to our young students. He is a very respected, honorable person and has been doing great in the White House. We could have a huge assembly at the end of the day and he could answer all the questions that we asked. I think that Trump would bring a sense of seriousness to our wonderful school, he could tell us all about living in the White House, going to different countries, and meeting other presidents. I bet the students would be really exited about this rare and important encounter ship.
Sincerely,
Brandon Gough
You are a really great writer! I like how you use sarcasm to make your post funny! The only thing was that, I don't think "encounter ship" is a real thing, other than that, awesome job!:)
ReplyDelete"Wonderful seriousness"...LOL! I love your sense of humor. This was really funny and I can't laugh out loud because I'm sitting in a district training reading this...struggle is real. Good justification. As you revise, I'd add more because you have a good thing going. Yes, "encountership" is a fake word, but President Trump seems to have fake news in his life, so it'll work. Great job!
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