Dear Mrs. Gubler,
I heard that you wanted to invite a celebrity to speak at our school. First of all, this is an amazing idea! If you are having trouble deciding which celebrity, maybe I could en-light you on someone that everyone could enjoy, Johnny Depp. Johnny is the perfect choice because he has been in so many movies that we enjoy. Even if you haven´t seen any of them, you will still know who he is because of Pirates of the Caribbean. Johnny would keep us entertained because of his hilarious remarks, interesting stories, and fun ways to tell us how he got to be a star. Depp would also be amazing to take pictures with, get autographs, and face it just be in his presence! He could tell us why he loves to be in the Pirates of the Caribbean series too! Mrs. Gubler, Johnny Depp is a great choice that I think we would all enjoy!
Hope it helped,
Courtney Derrick
You are a really good writer! I love that I didn't see the same phrase over and over again in your writing, a skill I could work on.. I think that maybe you could make your letter a little bit longer. I do love Johnny Depp and I think it would be so cool to have him come to our school!
ReplyDeleteThat is a really good idea, I didn't even think about celebrities like that! I love Johnny Depp and think it would be totally awesome if he came! I didn't see anything wrong with your work. I agree with Abbey, I didn't see anything that you put in over and over again. You are an amazing writer! Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteI was laughing because I could see a visual of Johnny Depp doing selfies with you guys at school! Fun piece to read. If you revise, double-check spelling. Really good word choices and reasons. Thanks!
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