Dear Mrs Gubler,
I heard you were thinking about inviting a celebrity to our school. I think this would be great for our school. I do have a suggestion on who you should invite. His name is Patrick Willis. He is a retired linebacker from the 49ers. But that is not all that would make him a great visitor. He grew up very very poor, he couldn't even afford to play peewee football. But he is still considered one of the better linebackers of all time. The only reason he made it to the NFL was by working hard and never giving up on his dream. I think he would be very inspiring to everybody who has almost a crazy dream. Or maybe just anyone.
From,
Braden
Thursday, September 28, 2017
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Nicely done Braden! I liked that you chose someone interesting to you and you had solid reasons. As you revise, fix that last sentence, it should be part of the previous one. Great writing:)
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