If you were going to invite a celebrity to our school you should invite Brandon Mull. You should invite him because he is a great author and could help promote reading and writing in our school. Also he could tell us about how his first book was rejected and how he came back and wrote a new book that was published the first time. He could also tell about his child hood and how he was always daydreaming about adventures and how as he got older he wanted to become an author. Overall I think you should invite Brandon Mull to our school to inspire us to write.
Sincerely,
Braxton Dunbar
You are an awesome writer! I love your style of writing! The only mistake I found was, childhood is one word, and you made it two. Other than that, keep up the amazing work!:)
ReplyDeleteYou seem good at this. The sentences seem long enough and the letter seems good. The only thing that I found wring (P.S I make the worst criticism ever)is that you (sorta) spelled something wrong, childhood is one word, not two, so yeah, see ya next blog post!
ReplyDeleteBig Brandon Mull fan here and I love he's from Utah! Good writing with minimal grammar and spelling errors. I liked your reasons but would love for you to add more to make a solid argument. Overall, great work!
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