Tuesday, September 19, 2017
Dear Mrs. Gubler,
I heard you were inviting a celebrity to our school. I don't have anyone particular in mind but I think you should invite some kind of sport person. Most of them have really good stories of how they failed but kept trying. Most of them could teach us how to not give up and how to keep trying when it seems impossible to keep going. A lot of football players and basketball players have gone to schools before. Most students would love it if some famous sports person came to our school. Everyone would have so much fun! They could talk about always trying and never giving up. Also about how to keep going when people say you can't do it. It would be AMAZING if you would invite a sports person to our school.
Sincerely, Courtney Pack
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I really like this post, I totally agree that an athlete would be a great person to come and talk to our school! I noticed that you used the word "most" quite a bit. I think that maybe you could find some synonyms of the word! Other than that, this was a great post!
ReplyDeleteI do appreciate your honestly. The general advice worked well. Good justification in wanting an athlete to visit. Yes, switch up word choices a bit, but overall strong writing. Thanks!
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