Mashed Potatoes
Of all the thanksgiving foods that you are dreaming about to eat on Thanksgiving day, which one brings you the most exhilaration? You guessed it! Mashed potatoes, creamy, soft, warm, mashed potatoes. Just take a moment to envision them in your mind , seriously... And, the mashed potatoes don't have to be by themselves, you can put many types of gravy, vegetables mixed into it, or even turkey and other meats. There are so many different combinations! Referring to fluent.com, mashed potatoes is the 3rd most wanted food for thanksgiving. For many people, they don't think that mashed potatoes is the best part of Thanksgiving, but I think that all would agree that it is a crucial part to a good Thanksgiving meal. Overall, mashed potatoes are of great significance to at great thanksgiving dinner.
-Bryce Christiansen
Bryce. (*scowls*)
ReplyDeleteBesides that, this was pretty darn good! You had some grammatical errors, such as "Mashed potatoes is....", but overall you did great!
Great Job. I like how you used big words. The only mistake I could find was at the end when you said "significance to at great thanksgiving". That was literally the only mistake I could find though.
ReplyDeleteNice job Bryce. That was really good. The only mistake I saw was when you said, "in your mind , seriously..." You probably know where the comma really goes and just didn't see that, so great job!
ReplyDeleteGood job. The only thing I see is that you should maybe use are the 3rd best and not the word is.
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