By Anna Steel
Wednesday, November 15, 2017
Mashed Potatoes
Thanksgiving has lot and lots of yummy foods, but do you know what is the best one yet? Mashed potatoes! I mean have you ever had a Thanksgiving without mashed potatoes? Mashed potatoes are easily the best food for thanksgiving. Did you know 85% of people have mashed potatoes for Thanksgiving! Those other 15% are just crazy town. I don't know if I could live with out mashed potatoes. I mean don't you just love those delicious, creamy, smooth potatoes with amazing homemade gravy on top. My mouth is watering from just writing about it. Over all, mashed potatoes are obviously the best Thanksgiving food.
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Good job Anna! Am I drooling?.... Anyways, you did really good! Some things I noticed were that you didn't capitalize Thanksgiving a few times, and maybe you could fix some sentences with grammatical errors? You also had a sentence, "Did you know 85% of people have mashed potatoes for Thanksgiving!" You could replace the exclamation point with a question mark. Overall though, you did GREAT!
ReplyDeleteGood job Anna!! I really liked it! I just saw a couple grammar mistakes. Other than that Great job!!
ReplyDeleteMy mouth literally started watering! That was super good I just saw some grammar mistakes but other than that, it was amazing!
ReplyDeleteThanks guys!!!
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