My favorite Christmas tradition do is making Gingerbread Houses!
Every year my family a week before Christmas we make gingerbread houses with my grand parents and my uncle. My dad buys a bunch of gram crackers and he hot glues them together and this year he made castles. While we make the gingerbread houses my little sister piper and my grandpa Oso sing Christmas songs together. It is the cutest thing ever! While their singing me and Gigi (my other little sister) decorat our houses. (But most of the decorations were gone because piper used them all, she thinks she needs everything on her house.) Other than that it is so much fun! Then after the decorating is done we take pictures by our houses and then we have dinner with my grandparents and uncle. Then after dinner we say our good byes and then the day is over. -Ellee B
Good job! I saw a couple mistakes so you might want to read it over again but over all good job!
ReplyDeleteGood job! I just saw a couple of spelling mistakes and some run on sentences. One thing I noticed specifically was that you used the wrong word at one point it said," while their singing" when it should be "while they're singing." But, that tradition sounds really fun, great job!
ReplyDeleteGreat! Good explanation. I saw that you didn't capatalize your sisters name, but besides that, you did great!
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