My Favorite Christmas Tradition
My favorite Christmas tradition is Christmas Eve. On Christmas Eve our family goes to our grandparent's house. There we open pajamas, I open my presents, as Christmas Eve is my birthday and we go home, get into our pajamas and go to sleep, preparing for Christmas. The first reason of why I like Christmas Eve is that it's my birthday! Second, it's almost Christmas, the most wonderful time of the year! Third, is that we watch Santa Claus go to each area of the world and give gifts. I hope you like my family's Christmas Tradition.
Nice job. I could not find any mistakes. Sounds fun to have your birthday on Christmas eve. The only thing though is that it is a little short. Other than that you did a great job.
ReplyDeleteGood job!!!! I really liked it the only thing I saw you could fix is to make it a little longer and put your name. Other than that great job!
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job! I liked how you described why you like Christmas eve. The only things I would suggest fixing is that you should put your name so that people can tell you wrote it. Good job!
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