My Xmas tradition it pretty basic. I don't really do a lot as far as traditions but I got one. PAJAMAS, on Christmas eve we open a gift. and we get new pajamas to sleep in! If we don't get pajamas then we get to pick one Christmas present early. I will show you examples of this in the 2 paragraphs below.
p.j's are great. we usually get the funny iconic ones that really fit into the Christmas spirit. for example, one year I got an ugly Christmas sweater and matching pants. another year I got footie pajamas. After we open the p.js, we get to put them on. The sucky part about this is then we have to take pictures but it not TOO bad.
This is the alternative, to open one of our smaller christmas presents. It is the same thing as the last but just switching pajamas, for presents! I got a limited edition Marilyn Monroe magazine cover last time. Another time I got a cat clock, (that was a long time ago). My Christmas tradition is nothing exquisite. But fun and I like it. <3
Great writing Patience!!! It sounds like you have a really fun Christmas. One thing I saw you could fix is in the first paragraph when you put a period before, and. But other than that I really liked it.
You did a good job! I also get PJ's to sleep in. The only thing I would suggest changing is in the first sentence, instead of saying, "I got one." You could say, "I've got one" or, "I have one." just to make it should more appealing. Other than that, you did a great job!
Great job Patience! One thing I noticed was that you did not capitalize p.j's at the beginning of the second paragraph. Other that that you did a great job.
Good job! One thing I noticed was at the beginning of the first sentence, it says, "My Xmas tradition it pretty basic". You would change the "it" to "is". I also agree with the others on capitalizing p.j's. Other than that, great job!
Great writing Patience!!! It sounds like you have a really fun Christmas. One thing I saw you could fix is in the first paragraph when you put a period before, and. But other than that I really liked it.
ReplyDeleteYou did a good job! I also get PJ's to sleep in. The only thing I would suggest changing is in the first sentence, instead of saying, "I got one." You could say, "I've got one" or, "I have one." just to make it should more appealing. Other than that, you did a great job!
ReplyDeleteGreat job Patience! One thing I noticed was that you did not capitalize p.j's at the beginning of the second paragraph. Other that that you did a great job.
ReplyDeleteGood job! One thing I noticed was at the beginning of the first sentence, it says, "My Xmas tradition it pretty basic". You would change the "it" to "is". I also agree with the others on capitalizing p.j's. Other than that, great job!
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