Every year on the 31st of December, I always make a resolution I know that I will never keep. This year, though, I am actually hoping to stick with it. That's because my New Year's un-resolution is to stop procrastinating. I know that everyone is writing about the same thing, but it is something that I want to fix. I always put work off until the last second, somehow I usually get it done then, but it is still really important that I just get it done while I can. Hopefully this year, I will actually try to keep going with my un-resolution, instead of just deciding on something not that important and joking about it for the rest of the year.
- Tierney Christensen
Great wording! I love how well everything flows. The only sentence I would fix was when you said, "I always put work off until the last second......" The sentence just went on for a while and I thought you could maybe make them seperate sentences
ReplyDeleteFantastic job!Loved all of this. The only thing I would maybe say ism maybe make it a tiny pit longer or add more detail. Other than that though you did awesome!!
ReplyDeleteThat was super Good for your first or second time!! One thing the 3rd to last sentence is was a little long, so what I would do is start a new sentence with “But,”. ( and then go on with the rest of the sentence.) but other than that is was FABULOUS!!
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