My Un Resolution
My un resolution is to stop missing the bus. Every morning when my alarm goes off, I think to myself that I will wake up in 30 seconds. Every morning I fall back to sleep before I reach thirty 30 seconds. Another problem I have when my alarm goes off, is turning off my alarm before I even give waking up a second thought. My alarm is also very annoying. Sometimes I have a strong urge to throw it against the wall and break it. My solution to this problem is to put the alarm clock on the other side of the room so I have to get out of bed to go get it. Then I will put legos on the ground so I step on them on my way to the alarm clock. This will hurt really badly and wake me up for the day. My un resolution is to stop missing the bus.
By Will Nadauld
Nice job. Your paragraph was really funny. One thing you could fix is combining two sentences with a conjunction to make it sound better. Other than that, well done!
ReplyDeleteGreat job! This is really good writing. Except one thing I saw you could fix is that you wrote the number 30 twice in different forms. I don't know if you meant to do that but just in case!
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