My Un-resolution
By: Courtney Derrick
Last year I found myself doing a lot of non-productive things. For example, when I should be outside playing i'm in on a phone, tablet or computer watching David Lopez vines and eating unhealthy foods like chips. So my resolution is to eat healthier and get more active. I'm going to try to set down that phone and get active. I am going to try to eat trail mix instead of chips. This un-resolution will make my body healthier and stronger. I encourage others do to the same because it won't just improve your health, it will put you in a better mood! All in all, my un resolution is to get off of the electronics and get active, and eating healthier foods than chips and other junk that is harmful to your body.
Good writing I couldn't find anything wrong.
ReplyDeleteNice job Courtney! Only one thing I think you should do differently is indent. Other than that I thought your writing was very descriptive and well done. I enjoyed reading it!
ReplyDeleteAwesome Courtney! Although It would look much nicer if you indented. It is an amazing paragraph though and I totally agree! Keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteGood Courtney, good. The only thing I could find wrong (if you could even count this as something wrong and that is the same as two people above me) is that you didn't seem to indent. The post was amazing in all other aspects.
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