My Un-Resolution
Every year I tell myself to stop eating candy but I always do! Every time I see a piece of candy my stomach goes crazy and it tell me I need it, I do not know why I listen to it, because I always end up felling sick. This year I am trying to be better and to limit my candy a month. That way I won’t always fell sick when I eat too much candy at a friends house. ( Becasue my family never has store bought candy, we always bake it, and it tastes so much better!) This is how I am going to help with my Un- Resolution. -Ellee Bolander
Awesome job Ellee! You are a amazing writer! The only thing I saw, was that in the your second sentence, you said it tell me instead of it tells me, and you misspelled feeling. Other than that it was so good! Keep up the amazing writing!:)
ReplyDeleteGreat Job Ellee! You are a really good writer! That's really cool that your family makes their own candy! The only mistakes that I saw were ones that Addie already pointed out. Keep on being awesome!
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