Dear America,
This selection has been hard. Picking between people is rough but I think your the one. Your so sweet, loving, kind, and I am blinded by your beauty. Your beautiful inside and out, your the love of my life, your flawless. Every time I am with you I have an incredible time. I know you have feelings for Aspen to but I promise if you choose me I will protect you throughout your life. I promise that you will be happy with me and we can have an amazing life together. We are meant to be together and when we are together no one and separate us. Your a phenomenal person, that can do so much. You are truly amazing. You are my one and only and it will be like that forever. I am the luckiest person in the whole world to just have you in my life. Love you more than the world and never forget that
Love,
Maxon
Done by: Anna Steel
Nice Job Anna! Your letter had a lot of description. However, you said "your" for a sentence like "your beautiful" Next time try to phrase it like this "you're beautiful". But other than that it was amazing! You did great!
ReplyDeleteThanks Kamree as I was reading over my essay again, I realized it! Thanks so much ill remember that next time!
DeleteThis way good! You used a lot of adjectives and it really showed how much he loved her and what the thought about her! I noticed the same thing that Kamree did! Just make sure that you use "you're" and "your" correctly! Other than that it was awesome! Good job!
ReplyDeleteAwesome job Anna! I agree will Kamree and Abbey. Also maybe put a ¨love¨ or ¨sincerely¨ at the end to make it sound more like a love letter. Everything is great! good job!!!
ReplyDeleteSo good Anna! I loved it!! The only thing I saw was the same as Kamree's! Great job!
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