Monday, February 26, 2018

Dear Beast, 

 I understand why you locked me up and had such a bad temper. I forgive you and love you. Thank you so much for almost dying for me. You are my hero. Also thank you for saving my dad's life. I love him so much and without him I would be miserable.  I also couldn't imagine a world without you. You are my true love. People say you are just an ugly beast, but I love you no matter what. To me all that matters is the inside, and inside you are the most kind, loving person I have ever met. I will always love you and will never forget you.  xoxoxoxoxxo 

 Love, Bell

 By: Will Warner


                 




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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousFebruary 27, 2018 at 1:44 PM

    Nice job Will, I liked the ending. I didn't see anything I'd change so good job.

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  2. AnonymousFebruary 28, 2018 at 9:35 AM

    Great Job! However on the last sentence you forgot to put a period after xoxoxooxoxoxoxo other then that I could not find any other mistakes. Nice job.

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  3. AnonymousMarch 2, 2018 at 7:46 AM

    Nice job. Just make your sentences longer and less choppy.

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