Dear Anna,
I still can’t believe you convinced Elsa to open the gates. And the way you cared for her after she spelled you. That like blows my mind! Anyways this note was to tell you how I feel about you. Anna my love for you can’t be explained with words. Ever since I saw you in that shed convincing me to take you up the mountain to see your sister I had my heart set on you. I also was woundering if you would like to go on a sleigh ride with me? ( Sven wanted me to ask you that, because he wanted to see you.) Also how has Olaf been I haven’t seen him for a while? Anyways, I hope you know Anna that I like and care about you.
Love,
Kristoff
By: Ellee Bolander
Great Job! The only two things I saw were spelling errors. The first one was you spelled wondered as woundered. The last one I think was a spelling error, you said “Anyways this note was to tell how I fell about you” I think fell should be spelled as feel. To conclude, This was an amazing imaginative paragraph.
ReplyDeleteGood Job! Like Kennedie said, all the errors I could see were those spelling errors. Make sure to read through your writing and use spell check. Everything else was great! Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteYou did a good job! One of the things I noticed was the sentence, "Also how has Olaf been I haven’t seen him for a while?". You might want to change that sentence around a little bit and put the question mark in between been and I, then a period at the end. Other than that, you did great work!
ReplyDeleteYou did a good job! One of the things I noticed was the sentence, "Also how has Olaf been I haven’t seen him for a while?". You might want to change that sentence around a little bit and put the question mark in between been and I, then a period at the end. Other than that, you did great work!
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