Mashed Potatoes
The aromas of Thanksgiving are all delicious when they're wandering around all over your house. Just think of all those pies, the turkey, rolls, stuffing, cranberry sauce! Though the best dish is actually the mashed potatoes. Seriously though, everyone loves mashed potatoes! (Unless you are really crazy.) I mean, the volcanoes to make, with the gravy drizzling all down the sides. Or the cranberry sauce to mix your potatoes with, and the vegetables you could stir up in there. There are so many ways to help make them delicious! Plus, according to The Daily Meal the recipe for mashed potatoes is the number one looked up thing for Thanksgiving. So many people love it, and no wonder. Some people think of it as a side dish but for a lot of people it's just a plate of scrumptious food. All in all, mashed potatoes are the best dish on Thanksgiving's large menu.
By: Daisy Jessop
Awesome job! My mouth watered while I read this! You had a really nice hook and good paragraph length! It was very hard to catch any mistakes, but you put some commas where they weren't that necessary. Overall, I love this!
ReplyDeleteThanks Gabby! I'll work on the commas, I've also noticed I have a problem with those. :)
DeleteNo problem! You write very well!
DeleteGood job Daisy Jessop, I liked how you wrote the hook, I could barely find any mi-steaks in this but there was one... There wasn't a 'and' on the 'the turkey, rolls, stuffing, cranberry sauce,' and yes, that was the only thing I could see. (mashed potatoes with dragons)
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