Cranberry Sauce: The Best Thanksgiving Dish
By: Gabriella Dutson
Cranberry sauce, by far, is the best and yummiest dish served on Thanksgiving. Just think about dipping your spoon in that sticky, sweet sauce and smothering it all over your moist, tender turkey. I even have family members that eat it by the spoonful! Plus, according to "Thatsitfruit.com", it contains approximately 90% water! Scrumptious and hydrating! No one can deny the tart, yet savory-sweet taste of the gooey, pink-red heaven that is cranberry sauce! So grab your cranberries, sugar and water and make everyone at the table drool this Thanksgiving!
Nice job! I loved how descriptive you made it, and how the words you used were actually accurate. The picture was a nice touch too. :) Super great job! Keep writing like this!
ReplyDeleteThank you Daisy!
DeleteAwesome job! That was awesome! I love how you described the dish! I couldn't find anything wrong with it so, great job!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Jocelyn! You are so nice :)
DeleteNice job Gabby!!! I loved how descriptive you were in the paragraph! I couldn't find any mistakes either :)
ReplyDeleteYou all are so kind! And thank you, Camille! It means a lot :)
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ReplyDeleteGood writing! I love how detailed your writing was. You had my mouth watering. One thing you could add was length, but really it was super descriptive. It was short and sweet. Honestly sweet!
ReplyDeleteThanks Will! I'll be sure to add some more length to my work next time.
DeleteNice detail. Sounds so good that I could almost be hymitized.
ReplyDeleteGabby you made my mouth water. That was super good! Maybe next time add a little more length. Over all that was amazing!
ReplyDeleteThat was really good! I love how descriptive and detailed it was. It was so good!
ReplyDeleteAMAZING JOB! I couldn't find ANY mistakes! fantastic writing.
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