Thursday, November 16, 2017
Ham (extreme effects)
Ok, so, you might be asking, "who the heck likes ham more than turkey or mashed potatoes," and to that question, I say me. One of the reason of why I like ham more than mashed potatoes and turkey is that first it's easy to eat, like, really easy like mashed potatoes. Second, is that it's meat... What? That's not a reason? Yes it is! It has a combination of both turkey and mashed potatoes! According to Google, it has 58 calories per 1 oz. It's easy to eat, it's meat, it can be cooked, it can be served on a plate, it can be served in a bowl, etc. Now that is why I like Ham better than turkey and mashed potatoes... Yes, this is a good paragraph... Right?
-By the Jack Musser with dragons!
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Good job! Maybe make the reasons longer why you like ham over turkey. I did not really understand. But other than that, good job.
ReplyDeleteNice paragraph. I was really funny. Something that I noticed is that you said IT a lot. Other than that it was a great paragraph.
ReplyDeleteNice paragraph. The only thing that I noticed is that you forgot to capitalize the first word in your quotation, in the first sentence.
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