by:patience cox
Monday, November 6, 2017
Thanksgiving is the best time of the year. You got mouth-watering food. My favorite food is the turkey. Just think about it. It is the prize part of the meal for a reason. According to the article, "The grate thanksgiving turkey debate." from The New York Times, I find turkey perfectly acceptable. Benjamin Franklin actually wanted to make it the National Bird." This states that Benjamin Franklin wanted it to be the state bird just for the taste of the delicious bird. So, to sum up, EAT TURKEY IT IS THE BEST!

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Good job Patience! Turkey is really good, and I really liked who you cited! Some things I would work on would be punctuation, capitalization and spelling. A few examples are that Thanksgiving has a capital "T" because it is a proper noun, and you spelled "grate" instead of "great". Overall, nice work!
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ReplyDeleteFantastic writing! The only thing I saw was that you had a few spelling errors but other than that fantastic job! :)
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