Mashed Potatoes By: Courtney Derrick
The best thanksgiving food is my Grandma's famous mashed potatoes. They taste like heaven and when the mashed potatoes barely touch your tongue you get an amazing sensation you can't find anywhere else. Words can't describe the smell of the sweet warm potatoes as they are set down on the table. All of the cousins dive for them and they are gone in .0001 seconds. Now you may be thinking, "What makes these potatoes so good?" Your answer is, the spices the creaminess, these are different from any ordinary potatoes. These potatoes are the most creamy thing your tongue will ever touch.
Good job Courtney! That was good! One thing make sure when you start a paragraph you put an indentation. But other than that it was good!:)
ReplyDeleteGreat writing Courtney! I like the details you use.
ReplyDeleteThat was really good!! And it sounds amazing! I agree with Ellee that you need to indent, but overall it was awesome!
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