Pumpkin Pie
What would Thanksgiving be without the pumpkin pie? It would be a sad feast, and even sadder dessert. Pumpkin pie is the BEST food at Thanksgiving, because of how much people like it. According to the Most Popular pies on Thanksgiving: it says that 16% of people like pumpkin pie the most. Why blame them? 16% may seem like a small percent, but there are so many types of pies. The 16% for pumpkin pie defiantly tops the 2% for cheese pie. To conclude, pumpkin pie is the, without a doubt, best food at the Thanksgiving feast.
-Averi Cobb
-Averi Cobb
Good Job Averi! That was really good, one thing if you were quoting the words from a text you would want to put quotation marks. But, I don't know if you were quoting or not.
ReplyDeleteThis was really good! Pumpkin pie is really yummy! I really like how you used the percentages! I would change your last sentence a bit to say, "To conclude, pumpkin pie is, without a doubt, the best food at the Thanksgiving feast!"
ReplyDeleteNice job! I liked how specific you were! Other than the mistake that Abbey found, I couldn't find any mistakes. Great job!
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