Pumpkin Pie
Did you know the largest Pumpkin Pie ever was 3,699 pounds? That's a very large Pumpkin Pie!!! Pumpkin Pie is easily the best part of Thanksgiving dinner! Can you even imagine Thanksgiving with out the mouthwatering, exquisite Pumpkin pie? Well according to www.hercampus.com pumpkin pie is 1st on the leader board for the best Thanksgiving dessert. You can't not have the most important holiday in fall with out pumpkin pie! Especially when it's ranked number 1 best dessert! Obviously, Pumpkin Pie is the best part of Thanksgiving and you can't have thanksgiving without it!
- Gwyn Lamoreaux
- Gwyn Lamoreaux
Good Gwyn, good, it was, pretty good. The only thing I don't like about it is the fact that the sentences I feel are too short... Yes, that was like the only criticism I could find in my brain.
ReplyDeleteGood Job. I like how you used lots of big words. One thing that I noticed is that you said you can't not. Which I think cancel each other out. Not really sure. That is the only mistake I could find though. Nice job.
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