Out of all of the foods you usually have for Thanksgiving, which is the best? I mean turkey, stuffing, corn, pie and all that stuff is
ok.....but MASHED POTATOES!! Oh mashed potatoes, they're so fluffy and silky smooth with that buttery smell, when you eat them they melt in your mouth. According to "foxbusiness.com" it says,"31% of Americans say mashed potatoes are their favorite Thanksgiving side dish. Green beans and corn aren’t nearly as popular. Only 5% of those surveyed said corn was their favorite, while 6% enjoy green beans the most." You see mashed potatoes are one of the best side dished you can have and they are delicious! So, go test if I am right and make them for Thanksgiving. You'll see why they are my favorite!!
-Kennedie Harris
Your writing was very good! I liked how you didn't just include information about mashed potatoes, but how you also included how mashed potatoes are better than corn and green beans. Honestly, I couldn't find any mistakes.
ReplyDeleteMashed potatoes are my favorite too. They are so good. Good job on describing how good the mashed potatoes really are. They are so good, wish I could have mashed potatoes for every meal.
ReplyDeleteI agree with you all the way! Mashed potatoes are pretty good. I also like how you added percentages. There weren't really any mistakes! Nice job!
ReplyDeleteThat was really good! I love how you compared with percentages. It made it seem even more important.
ReplyDeleteThat was great! I like how you put the other percentages in. The only mistake I found was at the last part you put "one of the best side dished you can have..." instead of "one of the best side dishes you can have..." Other than that, it was perfect. Great job!
ReplyDeleteGreat job!! I love how you were so descriptive, but I saw 1 or 2 grammar errors.
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