I love Thanksgiving. It is so yummy with all the mashed potatoes and gravy. I especially love the bread dipped in cranberry sauce. It is filled with sweetness and you are filled with love as you slowly bring it closer to your mouth. Once you ate all the bread with cranberry sauce smeared all over that toasty bread, you can't stop having more. So tempting to just take a single bite, isn't it.
Your writing was very good, and descriptive, but maybe bedtime include a name, and information from a source to add to your Wonderfull writing. no biggie though:)
ReplyDeleteI love how descriptive it was but maybe next time you could add a little bit more to it. Good job!
ReplyDeleteThat was really good and descriptive. But next time maybe add some more to it and sign it with your name. But other than that you did amazing!
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