Thanksgiving is full of lots of awesome foods. However, turkey is obviously the best because everybody likes it. From the article Thanksgiving by the Numbers it said "46million turkeys are consumed on Thanksgiving". To elaborate, since so many people eat turkey on thanksgiving it has to be the best. Who does not love the smell of turkey after it was just pulled out of they oven. Turkey tastes even better if you can dip in gravy. Turkey is the all time classic. Obviously, turkey is the best food at thanksgiving.
- Will Nadauld
Good job Will!! The only thing I would do is put a title. Other then that it was awesome! Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteNice! I agree with you Turkey is the best. One thing you need to fix is a grammar error. Besides that great job!
ReplyDeleteNice work! The only things I would fix are that there is a place missing a space, you could add a title maybe, and since Thanksgiving is a proper noun, it should have a capital "T". Other then that, you did excellent! Keep it up! :)
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