Thanksgiving Pie!
By: Jocelyn Olson
Thanksgiving just isn’t complete without Thanksgiving Pie. Pie is definitely one of the best food served at Thanksgiving. Pie is the fourth favorite dessert in America. Plus, there are many different flavors. If you don’t like apple pie or pumpkin pie, then you can still choose from so many more different varieties! Some pies are healthy too! Not only do they taste good, but they look good too. Pie is one of the many reasons why I look forward to Thanksgiving. As you can see, there are so many reasons why pie is a very important dish at Thanksgiving dinner.
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ReplyDeleteNice work Jocelyn! Now I could really go for some pumpkin pie! I would just work on grammar a bit because of the sentnce that says: "Pie is one of the best food", but all in all I really like this!
ReplyDeleteAwesome job! I totally agree with you pie is amazing. One thing I saw is that you didn't put down where you got the information. Although, I forgot to as well, so no biggie. Keep up the good writing!
ReplyDeleteGood job! I noticed the same thing that Will said just make sure to put where you got your information! Keep it up!!!
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