If you are wondering which Thanksgiving food is the best, look no further than yams! Candied yams are by far the best Thanksgiving food around. They are the best because they are fairly simple to make and are very delicious, if you make them right. In the article, "Delicious Secret About Yams Is No Secret At All, They Are Sweet" it says “of course yams are better, [your friends] will tell you. They are richer, moister, smoother and sweeter."(paragraph 1) than any other Thanksgiving dish. This evidence matters because no one can resist the delicious sweet taste of yams smothered in butter, cinnamon, a touch of cloves and covered in gooey, toasted marshmallows. I hope this delicious dish is on your table this Thanksgiving. Yum! Yum! ;-) Braxton Dunbar
Hey great paragraph! But, I noticed that Mrs. Robins said to find a website or saying or something online to support why the food you chose was the best. And you didn't. Just a heads up!! Great Job!!
ReplyDeleteI really liked your descriptive writing, and besides what Kennedy said, I could only find one mistake. Maybe it would be best if you added a comma at the start where it says "When you are wondering which Thanksgiving food is the best(add it here) look no further than yams... Otherwise, it was great!
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