You Wanna Piece Of Me?
What is the best Thanksgiving food? Turkey, stuffing, cranberry sauce, and mashed potatoes are all good, but pie definitely takes the cake (or should I say takes the pie?) Just think about it. After all those good salty foods like turkey or mashed potatoes, what you really want is something sweet. What's sweeter than pie? A hot, buttery, flakey crust with juicy, fruit filling inside, topped with cold vanilla ice cream just melts in your mouth. The cold icev cream balances out the hot pie, and it's so good you want to eat the whole thing. Everyone loves pie. In fact, pie is the top ranked Thanksgiving food, according to The Week. We all know that pie is by far the best Thanksgiving food.
-Janessa Wilding
Not everybody likes pie, although, I love pie. It is very yummy. I would eat any pie if I could. Good sentence starter and conclusion.
ReplyDeleteGreat job Janessa! Your title really caught my attention and the way the body was put together kept it all the way through. I noticed that you wrote icev cream instead of ice cream, but that was probably just a simple typo. Other than that, great job!!!
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