Thursday, January 25, 2018
My un-resolution is probably the worst in history. It is that my dogs stop being afraid of fireworks and yes, this is one of the only thing I could think of. As most resolutions or un-resolutions, we all are going to forget this and it's going to happen again, and again, and again. As you can tell I decided on the worst un-resolution possible that I have about no control over. -Jack Musser
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Good job Jack!! That was good! On thing is maybe make you paragraph a little bit longer, like two sentences. But, other than that is was really good!
ReplyDeleteGreat Job Jack! The only thing I think should be different is the length. Otherwise you did great!
ReplyDeleteThis is great writing Jack! Only something I think you could do diffrent is explain it better. Maybe mention why you picked this and how you plan to stop it.
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