Monday, October 23, 2017
Interesting Halloween
I was stuck at home all by myself. It was Halloween night, but mom had said that I was to old for trick-or-treating! I was so mad! I had the perfect costume picked out, and the perfect route from which house I was going to start at, to the house I was going to end at. This was going to be the best Halloween ever, and then mom had to go and ruin it. She and my dad were out trick-or-treating with my little sister. I figured I would just watch a not-too-scary Halloween movie. Just then an idea popped into my head, what if I invited my friend to have a late night with lots of candy and a movie! I decided to call her. I picked up the phone and dialed her number, ring....ring....ring...."hello" the voice said very deeply. I thought it was just Julia trying to prank me, so I said, "ha ha, so funny Julia, I was wondering if you wanted to come have a late night at my house?" Than she answered in a sort of Darth Vader-like voice, "I am coming right now".
Okay, that was kind of weird, I thought. So I just waited, I waited for like forty five minutes, and she still wasn't there! I thought maybe she decided not to come after all. Just then I saw a shadow lurking in the back window. How did anyone get back there? There is a combination on the gate that only my family knows, and the fence is too high to climb. I was starting to think that the voice I heard on the phone wasn't Julia trying to prank me. Than I heard a squeak, the creepy figure was trying to open the back door! Good thing it was locked, but was the front door? No time to question, I ran to the front door and locked it, and the garage door. I also made sure all the windows were shut and locked. Now what was I going to do? I decided I should maybe check if the shadow was still there. I slowly and quietly crept to the window and peeked out, the figure was gone! I was so freaked out! Then I remembered something, I could call my mom! I am so dumb, how did I not think of that before? I ran to the kitchen and grabbed the phone, it was ringing, and then I heard the ringtone in the background. I ran into my mom's room and sitting there was her phone, and my dad's phone! Now how would I get a hold of them?
I was almost crying now! Where was the figure, and what did it want from me? Just then I heard a knock on the door. It might be my mom and dad, but it also could be the figure! Should I answer it? I slowly walked to the door, and slowly pulled it opened.....eeeeeeek! Standing there was a creepy masked man holding a knife! I was so dead! All of the sudden the man pulled of his mask, and there was Julia, laughing so hard! I was so mad, more mad than I had ever been in my life, more mad than when my mom said I couldn't go trick-or-treating! "I'm going to get you back when your least expecting it!" I said. "But how did you get into the backyard?" I asked. " Remember that time you told me, because you were on a trip, and I left my soccer ball back there?" said Julia. "Oh yeah," I said. This has definitely been the most interesting Halloween ever!
By, Addie Platt
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This is great writing Addie! You used so much detail it made me scared. I love it!
ReplyDeleteWow that was an awesome story. I loved the twist at the end of the story. I didn't see any errors. keep up the good work
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