Dear Mrs. Gubler,
I think it would be amazing to have J.K. Rowling come to our school! Not only do I love her books, but I also love her personal story. She has gone through so many trials yet she is still one of the most well known authors in the world! Her books are famous everywhere! I also love writing, so I think that it would be way cool to have her do a writing workshop with us!
First of all, J.K. Rowling has had so many struggles in her life. Did you know she has dyslexia? She was also abused by her husband, in her young adult years. Depression was a big part of her life for a while on top of being dyslexic and abused. That would be so hard! I would really like to hear for myself and for others to hear her story and how she overcame her challenges! I think that would be awesome! I know many people that suffer from anxiety and depression and I think it would be way cool for them to hear that a world famous author can relate to them! I believe that this would let them know that they C A N do something, that they C A N be a somebody someday. Just because they're struggling right now doesn't mean that they will always struggle or that they can't do anything about it. J.K. Rowling is an awesome example of how challenges can make you stronger, and sometimes better. Challenges can bring out the best of you and you can go places you never thought you could.
Secondly, I love her Harry Potter books. Harry Potter is easily my most favorite series! J.K. Rowling is an amazing writing and I think it would be awesome to take a writing workshop from her! I could really work on my character and story developing skills. I would like for my story to come to life, just like hers do! I know my stories won't be perfect yet, but I would like them to improve and I think J.K. would be perfect to teach me, and my peers, how to develop a plot line and all of the details in between. If I could attend a writing workshop with her as the teacher, that would be such a cool experience! I would love that and remember it forever!
As you can see, having J.K. Rowling come to our school would be an amazing opportunity to learn about her life and her stories! I would absolutely love that, and I think a lot of my friends and peers would too! If you could have her come to our school, that would be extraordinary!
Sincerely,
Abbey Mathews
Abbey! This too good! There was a part in the third paragraph when you said she "is an amazing writing" that should be," is an amazing writer". This was really good! Keep it up girlfriend!
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ReplyDeleteLove this. I think everyone would want her to come to. The only thing I saw just like Gwyn that in the third paragraph it should be "is an amazing writer." not "is an amazing writing." Other than that this was so good and a great length.
ReplyDeleteThat is amazing Abbey!!!!!! Great job!!! And I agree with Anna and Gwyn. There is only that one mistake. But other than that you did a great job!!!
ReplyDeleteHi, I like how you have Strong points in your paragraphs. you can really convey your words. I would just say the conclusion could use a little more. Other than that, good work!
ReplyDeleteGreat Job Abbey, I agree with Halle, Gwyn, and Anna, but I loved the length in your writing and everything else. Great Job
ReplyDeleteThis was Amazing Abbey!! It had so much information and detail about J.K Rowling I had never heard about! The only mistake I found was when you said is an amazing writing when I think writer would have sounded better. Other than that you did such a wonderful job!
ReplyDeleteReally interesting letter. Great justification in wanting her to visit and I like that I learned more about her. Small grammar errors that were already commented on. Excellent writing! Well done:)
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