Dear Mrs. Gubler,
I don't have a specific person that I am dying to have come to our school, but someone who would make me really, REALLY happy to have come is Lin-Manuel-Miranda! If you haven't heard of him or his most famous Broadway Musical HAMILTON you're seriously missing out, get on the internet right now and read about him, Lin is seriously talented! I learn things easier when music is involved and Hamilton has so much history in all of its music its hard not to learn things.
Lin wrote the book, music and lyrics for Hamilton (also played as Alexander Hamilton), co-wrote the music for Disney Moana, and wrote the music and lyrics for the Broadway musical "In The Heights", these are just some of the things he's done. The reason I would love for him to come is, well obviously I'm a fan, but I have stage fright, I love singing yet no one knows and never hears me really sing. I am a total scared-y cat I can't sing in front of anyone, and Lin has definitely had some experience with with this and I know could give me some serious advice and pointers to help me come out of my shell. To be totally honest I would just love to meet him! He's so crazy talented and his work is amazing! I would be in pure shock if I ever met him! Lin-Manuel-Miranda is my hero and my idol, and I would love to have him come to our school!
Sincerely,
Gwyneth Lamoreaux
GWYN!!! I LOVE THIS! I totally agree with you Lin-Manuel-Miranda would be awesome! He is amazing! The only thing I saw was jut be careful where you put your commas. But other than that I absolutely loved this!
ReplyDeleteK I seriously love your style of writing! It is so appealing and I wanted to read more, I'm not even kidding. You are really talented. I also love Lin, his music is so good. One thing I saw is the scared-y cat and I think that maybe you could re word that as scaredy because it kind of sounds like scared Y cat, haha! Other than that, I really really liked this post, I could easily read it and it was entertaining! Good job! Love ya
ReplyDeleteI love how much enthusiasm you have in your writing. you honestly have a lot of character in your writing by saying words like totally, seriously and all that cool stuff. all I want to say is punctuation. but other than that, good job!
ReplyDeleteFun to read! I love Hamilton too. I appreciated how you talked about yourself too! I'd love to hear you sing, you gotta get your brave on girl:) One grammar error is his name. Lin-Manual is his hyphenated first name Miranda is last name--no hyphen needed. So, it'll look like: Lin-Manual Miranda. Great writing!
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