Dear Mrs. Gubler, what an amazing idea to invite someone to our school to speak to us. I don't have one person in mind, but I know that Ted Ed always has amazing speakers. Maybe we could invite one of the speakers that they have had talk on their show. I know they have a plethora of different topics that their speakers talk on. We could get someone to talk about all ways being kind and being true to ourselves. Thanks for thinking about inviting a speaker to our school.
Sincerely-
Averi Cobb
Amazing job Avery! I just noticed that after you wrote "Dear Mrs. Gubler," you started the body of the letter right after it, instead of starting it a line under. Hopefully that made sense!
ReplyDeleteGood job Avery! That was super good. I love how you would want them to come and talk to us about being kind and being true to ourselves. One thing is that you forgot to indent and “Dear Mrs. Gubler” would be before the body not with it. Good job!!
ReplyDeleteGreat job Averi! That was really good. Although, I do agree with Kennedie and Ellee about indenting and starting the body of the paragraph right after the "Dear Mrs. Gubler", but overall, I thought it was pretty good. Great job!
ReplyDeleteNice job Averi! I really loved all the details your post had! :) The only thing I would say is starting a new line after Mrs. Gubler like Kennedie said.
ReplyDeleteStrong word choices--I like it! I'm a big fan of TedEd and think that would be cool. Yes, on formatting suggestions as above and add more, giving solid reasons & details. Thanks!
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