Dear Mrs. Gubler,
I heard that you were inviting a celebrity to ur school, and I would like to make a suggestion. I think we should invite Tim Cook to our school. Tim Cook is now the chief executive officer of Apple after Steve Jobs died. I think that him coming to our school would be very beneficial to our students because of his experience and leadership in the technology field. He could talk about how the recent technology can change and has changed our learning, education, and economy. Besides, who doesn't want to learn a lot about Apple?
Sincerely,
Bryce Christiansen
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ReplyDeleteGreat writing I like smooth it is.I think one good thing you could do is elaborate more. Such as maybe talking more about what he could do
ReplyDeleteGood work Bryce! I like the idea a lot--yes, give more detail and expand your justification. Solid writing throughout, well done!
ReplyDeleteGreat job Bryce I really think that would be really beneficial for the schools tech program and CCA if Tim Cook was chosen to speak at LRIS.
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