Dear Mrs. Gubler,
I heard that you're planning on inviting a celebrity to the school! I think that it would be and amazing idea to invite J.K. Rowling to our school. First of all, she is an AMAZING writer, and she could help us so much with improving our writing. Secondly, she is very inspiring, as she was turned away from 12 different publishers with the Harry Potter series, and now it's one of the best selling series in the world! She can teach us to never give up and pursue our dreams, like she did. Thirdly, J.K. Rowling is a very kind and charitable person, and she would be very good to come to our school. That is why you should have J.K Rowling come to our school.
Sincerely,
Janessa Wilding
Nice job Janessa!! I love how you said WHY she would be a great person to invite to our school. I can never find anything wrong with your posts. Great job!!
ReplyDeleteGreat job Janessa! I liked how you mentioned that she was turned away from 12 different publishers, which is kind of crazy considering that Harry Potter is one of the best selling book series. I also like that you said that she could improve our writing, but I doubt she could improve yours:)
ReplyDeleteWOW!!! Janessa that's really good writing I don't see anything wrong and it flows really well. Amazing job!
ReplyDeleteExcellent writing! Nice sequence and I'm a huge fan of that lady:) As you revise, I'd flesh out the ending more. Great work!!
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