Wednesday, September 13, 2017

patiences letter

                                                                                                                                   9-12-17
            dear principal,
                          Hello, I just would like to say something. I think we should have a guest come to the school.  the person I think should come is... drum roll please, Maroon 5. they are awesome.  They will keep it PG.  Did I tell you how cool they are, they play concerts and are totally cool.
                          I promise if you ask they will keep it PG.  They will talk about nice things like none bullying and anything constructive.  I know this because you you hear there music it is nothing really bad or volger.  they have a good voice and have a lot of talent being a young age bracket performers.  the forien figers where a big hit and maroon 5 is not very different.
                           I also think that they will be a liked performance cause of there popularity and coolness. Just amagine them coming to lavaridge and staying we are a good school and give us a lesson on somting, the kids would take it to the hart becase, there pop stars! with there puplisity they could give your shcool a good review and have it make every fan page, news paper, and magazines.
                           To end everything, they are so popularand cool they would have a HUGE impact on the kids you have put you time and work in, and in the shcool you run. (with the help the other teachers and staff.)  They also have good morals and personality's themselves. so when you didide on the right chose with is mine you will be going the route to a grate time of no bullying no sadness, no more anything you dont want in the school.
                                                                                                            sincerely,
                                                                                                                  your sales pitcher patience cox

3 comments:

  1. Hey Patience, good writing! I think you should capitalize "dear" and "sincerely" everything else is great, good writing!

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  2. Your such an AMAZING writer I love this. The only thing I saw was maybe you should make your paragraphs a little longer. Other then that I really liked it. I really agree with Lollie how she said 'sincerely, your sales pitcher." That was awesome. Great job!

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  3. Oh girl, Maroon 5 would be one of my top choices! Great justification for having them visit. Watch capitalization--always capitalize greetings (Dear) and exits (Sincerely). Talk to me and I'll show you how to use spell check on blogger. Good writing! Thanks :)

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